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Cora approached
me last week with a school problem and she asked me to remove
it. She was required to pick a topic and effectively argue
her viewpoint on this subject in a five-page paper. Cora couldn't
decide what to write about, and she didn't understand how
to write the paper. Ah-ha! This problem presented a dual opportunity
for Cora to hone her argument skills and to convince her classmates
(and herself) that the stock market is the best investment
tool around.
The skill
of argument (or debate) is hopefully taught at school, but
we can help our teens become experts at home. Although a lesson
that teaches our teens how to logically support their ideas
seems fraught with peril, this skill will actually help them
mature. Maturity is great, because this attribute minds the
values of respect, ethics, and responsibility. Wouldn't parents
benefit from this miracle? I think so, but only if we utilize
the same skills.
Since
Cora was lethargic at that moment, she agreed with my idea
about promoting the stock market as a wise investment tool.
However, since she seemed uninterested (read: overwhelmed
with the whole project), the conversation degraded rapidly:
Me: "Why
would the stock market be the best investment tool?"
Cora: "'Cause."
Me: "That isn't a good reason."
Cora (rubs forehead, feigns headache): "C'mon mom, give me
a reason. I don't know."
Me: "You know the reasons. Let's write them down together."
Cora (looks at clock on wall, suddenly infused with energy):
"Omigosh! My favorite show just started!"
I allowed
her to watch the show, because I needed time to hunt for my
book. This book (noted below) provides the steps required
to develop an argument. My search and her show ended at the
same time (which might give you a clue to the number of places
I could hide this book), so we gathered pencils and paper
and began to examine this process together.
First,
we need to understand that argument is not combat or coercion,
but a method to discover and test solutions through cooperation
with others. The original meaning of the word "argument" was
to "make clear." The Latin "argentum" also meant silver. An
argument and silver, then, were examples of what it meant
to "shine." "Bad" or illogical arguments can divide a community
(or a household), because this method muddies the waters,
and nothing shines as a result. "Good" or logical arguments
strengthen a group, because we learn about ourselves and others
when we work through all the possible answers to a problem.
This concept
of argument is often difficult to swallow, because our everyday
lives are filled with combative language. Political debates
(which will soon fill our airwaves in this election year)
are great tools to notice these words, and how the use of
these words warps the original concept of argument. Some examples
of these words include "attack, advance, marshal, defense
and offense." Even stock market terminology includes challenging
words, like "bull, bear, order, and yield." The context, or
field, where these words are used can help us recognize the
meaning. We can also ask the person who uses these words to
explain what they mean so we can meet on less contentious
ground.
Once we
understand that argument in this sense is not a contest between
one side and another, but a way to work through problems cooperatively,
the next step is to make a claim for our argument. In Cora's
case, her claim is that the stock market is the best way to
invest money. Next, she supports that claim with one - and
only one - reason. Then, she supplies as much evidence as
possible to support that reason. When Cora used this format,
her argument was simplified, and it looked like this:
Claim:
The stock market is the best investment tool (comma),
Reason: BECAUSE charts and statistics prove the stock
market historically offers the best return on our initial
investment.
Evidence: Here, we begin our research to support our
reason. We want to find other people (preferably experts)
who make the same claim supported by the same reason. Why?
Because we want to discover and understand their evidence
so we don't have to re-invent the wheel. This does not mean
we copy their evidence word-for-word (plagiarism), nor do
we want to automatically agree with everything they say. We
copy their main points, compare their points with other expert
evidence, and organize all the similarities and/or differences
among our findings. If the majority of expert evidence is
similar, this agreement becomes what is known as a paradigm,
or a pattern or model. These paradigms (Cora calls them Pair
O'Dimes) are handy tools to support an argument, because most
people agree with obvious patterns, and our argument becomes
more convincing.
Note that
I included a (comma) and capitalized BECAUSE in the format
above. I did this to help Cora learn how to construct a topic
sentence, or how to establish the beginning of her written
argument. The final topic sentence for Cora's argument goes
like this:
"The stock
market is the best investment tool, because charts and statistics
prove the stock market historically offers the best return
on our initial investment."
The topic
sentence can also be written with the reason before the claim,
but the punctuation is a little different, and the word "because"
becomes the word "therefore":
"Charts
and statistics prove the stock market historically offers
the best return on our initial investment; therefore, the
stock market is the best investment tool."
Now, all
Cora needs to do is accumulate five pages of evidence and
drop them into her paper. However, "dropping" evidence into
an argument is also a learned skill. Next week, we'll explain
what Cora discovered about her claim and reason, and show
how she arranged her evidence.
Until
Then,
Linda Goin
The
Craft of Argument was written by Joseph M. Williams (U.
of Chicago) and Gregory G. Colomb (U. of VA), Longman Publishing,
2001 - There are separate approaches for teachers (parents)
and teens at the mid-teen to college level to help learn the
"craft of argument." Simple explanations, many examples and
tools to remember the steps.
The securities
markets are subject to the risks of fluctuating prices and
the uncertainty of rates of return and yields inherent in
investing and past performance is no guarantee of future results.
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